The person did not describe properly most of the important things .
When I reached the eerie isolated place , I went to search for the glasses .
Eerie as in how ?
How did he look for the glasses ?
No feelings when he reached the place ?
I thought it was a cave that had gold and gems but after i opened the trapdoor I saw a foot .
No pace ?
How slow/fast he open the trapdoor ?
So what if he saw a foot ?
What was his actions ?
What was his reaction to what he saw ?
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
I dragged my bicycle as we headed back home. "Can I have my glasses back now ?" , she asked me . I felt my pockets and discovered that they were missing . I gave one quick panicked look at her with my eyes widening . "I've lost them ...", I replied . She shrugged her shoulders . "Mum will kill you .".
I took a deep breath and closed my eyes . I tried to recall where we had been for the whole afternoon adn what would mum do if I could not find them . Then I opened my eyes and saw my sister trying to read my thoughts . I stared back at her with impatient eyes . "Wait here ." , I told her and I immediately dropped my bike and ran off .
I ran in the field , the grass brushing agaisnt my legs , trying to prevent me from going any further . I pushed my through . In my head , all I could think of was where the glasses could be . I managed to recall that we had been in one place and I tried to retrace my steps . The field seemed endless . I finally reached the place .
It looked like an eerie isolated place if you were alone . The place was dead quiet except for the crow who was crowing . I looked down and searched along the path . I must have dropped it here nearby .
I was looking through the grass when i finnally saw it as it shined in the sun . I went over to pick it up . Then I heard a loud thud . i looked down and picked the glasses up and stood up . For a moment , I just stared at the ground . Then I bent down again and brushed the grass away . It was a trapdoor . I wondered what would be behind the trapdoor ...
I had an uneasy feeling that I would discover somthing horrible but I took up all the courage I had and lifted up the latch . I slowly opened the door . I thought to myself and smiled ... a cave of gold and gems ... Dust flew out as I opend it ... light shone through the darkness ... I could see a coat and there was a foot showing ... covered with mud and dirt .
In a split second , I let go of the trapdoor and picked up my legs and sped off . I sprinted back to my sister , gripping the glasses tight as if I was about to break them . My heart was thumping so hard as if you could hear it . Sweat dripped down my face and i gasped for breath . I shot her one worried look and gave her back the glasses .
I took a deep breath and closed my eyes . I tried to recall where we had been for the whole afternoon adn what would mum do if I could not find them . Then I opened my eyes and saw my sister trying to read my thoughts . I stared back at her with impatient eyes . "Wait here ." , I told her and I immediately dropped my bike and ran off .
I ran in the field , the grass brushing agaisnt my legs , trying to prevent me from going any further . I pushed my through . In my head , all I could think of was where the glasses could be . I managed to recall that we had been in one place and I tried to retrace my steps . The field seemed endless . I finally reached the place .
It looked like an eerie isolated place if you were alone . The place was dead quiet except for the crow who was crowing . I looked down and searched along the path . I must have dropped it here nearby .
I was looking through the grass when i finnally saw it as it shined in the sun . I went over to pick it up . Then I heard a loud thud . i looked down and picked the glasses up and stood up . For a moment , I just stared at the ground . Then I bent down again and brushed the grass away . It was a trapdoor . I wondered what would be behind the trapdoor ...
I had an uneasy feeling that I would discover somthing horrible but I took up all the courage I had and lifted up the latch . I slowly opened the door . I thought to myself and smiled ... a cave of gold and gems ... Dust flew out as I opend it ... light shone through the darkness ... I could see a coat and there was a foot showing ... covered with mud and dirt .
In a split second , I let go of the trapdoor and picked up my legs and sped off . I sprinted back to my sister , gripping the glasses tight as if I was about to break them . My heart was thumping so hard as if you could hear it . Sweat dripped down my face and i gasped for breath . I shot her one worried look and gave her back the glasses .
Sunday, September 13, 2009
"Where are my glasses?" my sister asked kindly.I reached deep in my pockets. Looked around everywhere trying to find it." Oh no ... I'm gonna be in trouble!" I thought for awhile."Mum is going to kill you! " my sister said.Closed my eyes and took a deep breath, trying to recall the place which i've probably dropped it. "Stay here and wait for me."I said. Without hesitation, i dropped my bike and ran back to find the glasses.
I was running at the speed of light. Legs trying to spread out as long as possible. Wind is carrying me along, so that i could run faster than ever. Reaching the place, walking through the path , looking everywhere to find the glasses. Hoping that the glasses could appear in a sudden. Walking slowly through the brick door and up the hill.
I bent down to have a closer look on the ground. "No clues of the glasses.."I mumbled. I looked up and in the distance, I saw something shinning. "YES!Thank God i've found my glasses."I mumbled. I sighed with a relieve and ran eagerly to grab the glasses. "Thud" The sound made me curious on what am i stepping on. I raised my foot and slowly opened the door. My eyes is fixed at the ground. Dark shadows made me curious and excited to know the answer. I squinted my eyes , trying to figure out the whats inside. A leg appeared , I screamed and immediately closed the door. A loud sound came from the metal door.
I ran back to my sister like a ostrich, grabbing the glasses tightly. Reaching my destination and pass the glasses to my sister. "Let's rush home." I said. Sat on my bike and my sister stood on it.
-Adrea
I was running at the speed of light. Legs trying to spread out as long as possible. Wind is carrying me along, so that i could run faster than ever. Reaching the place, walking through the path , looking everywhere to find the glasses. Hoping that the glasses could appear in a sudden. Walking slowly through the brick door and up the hill.
I bent down to have a closer look on the ground. "No clues of the glasses.."I mumbled. I looked up and in the distance, I saw something shinning. "YES!Thank God i've found my glasses."I mumbled. I sighed with a relieve and ran eagerly to grab the glasses. "Thud" The sound made me curious on what am i stepping on. I raised my foot and slowly opened the door. My eyes is fixed at the ground. Dark shadows made me curious and excited to know the answer. I squinted my eyes , trying to figure out the whats inside. A leg appeared , I screamed and immediately closed the door. A loud sound came from the metal door.
I ran back to my sister like a ostrich, grabbing the glasses tightly. Reaching my destination and pass the glasses to my sister. "Let's rush home." I said. Sat on my bike and my sister stood on it.
-Adrea
Im not scared reflection
I think that it is not easy to make a clip like that because you need to make the character facial expression like worried, shocked.Not only the facial expression but also the action, while he was running the grass stopping him, slowing him down like want him to not get his sister glasses and the thoughts like he think what his mum will do to him, what is inside the tunnel.
Speech is also important like when the sister say mom will kill you her speech sounds serious.Angles shot is the most important thing to the video because to show the thing they need to show like the sister spectacles.The colors and lighting like he when opening trap door to see whats inside the tunnel.
Speech is also important like when the sister say mom will kill you her speech sounds serious.Angles shot is the most important thing to the video because to show the thing they need to show like the sister spectacles.The colors and lighting like he when opening trap door to see whats inside the tunnel.
Friday, September 11, 2009
"OH YEAH !!!!!!!!! COME AND GET ME !!!!!!!!",I exclaimed as the others chased after me . I laughed my head off .
It was our summer vacation and we decided to go around the fields to relax . I could see the fluffy clouds in the blue sky . The grass was tall , gleaming golden . I raced the others down the hill as the wind blew against me like gentle kisses . The scent of the fresh air wafted throug my nose . We played and laughed all the way . Yes , it was definitely the most perfect summer we ever had .
The next day , I went to the fields alone . I looked straight , as if i could see my prey like an eyes of an eagle . I ran through the tall grass with my arms wide open . Like any other bird that was released from it's cage , I ran like I had much freedom than I could ever had ...
As i ran through , I could feel the grass tickling my legs . That was when something caught my eye . I stopped frozen . I squinted my eyes to try to see what was happening . There was something mysterious up on te hill which was not very clear . My brain told me to get away but my body was still .
I had not noticed that I had been staring for a while until my arms felt heavy . I could not think straight . the ditraction had got me thinking really hard .
It was our summer vacation and we decided to go around the fields to relax . I could see the fluffy clouds in the blue sky . The grass was tall , gleaming golden . I raced the others down the hill as the wind blew against me like gentle kisses . The scent of the fresh air wafted throug my nose . We played and laughed all the way . Yes , it was definitely the most perfect summer we ever had .
The next day , I went to the fields alone . I looked straight , as if i could see my prey like an eyes of an eagle . I ran through the tall grass with my arms wide open . Like any other bird that was released from it's cage , I ran like I had much freedom than I could ever had ...
As i ran through , I could feel the grass tickling my legs . That was when something caught my eye . I stopped frozen . I squinted my eyes to try to see what was happening . There was something mysterious up on te hill which was not very clear . My brain told me to get away but my body was still .
I had not noticed that I had been staring for a while until my arms felt heavy . I could not think straight . the ditraction had got me thinking really hard .
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