Tuesday, September 15, 2009

The person did not describe properly most of the important things .

When I reached the eerie isolated place , I went to search for the glasses .

Eerie as in how ?
How did he look for the glasses ?
No feelings when he reached the place ?

I thought it was a cave that had gold and gems but after i opened the trapdoor I saw a foot .

No pace ?
How slow/fast he open the trapdoor ?
So what if he saw a foot ?
What was his actions ?
What was his reaction to what he saw ?

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